long quotation 2. Baker describes as the escalator as "They were the free standing kind: a pair of integral signs swooping upward between the two floors they served without struts or piers to bear any intermediate weight" -TheyCallMeFreshMoney
"uses" 6. The exert The Mezzanine by Nicholson Baker uses high language as he describes the lobby and escalators as, "area of shine where it fell against their brushed steel side panels." -Eddie
written in past tense 7.The Mezzanine, written by Nicholson Baker is elegant, elevated, and also scholarly in the verbs being used. This excerpt was not extremely musical. It was also literal in denotation, as while reading it. Throughout the excerpt Barker used excellent verbs and description to explain all of the sentences.-Let's Start!
talks about how the reader would feel 4. In the excerpt from Nicholson Baker’s novel, The Mezzanine, Baker’s literal tone, but relaxed voiced allows the reader to get inside the mind of the speaker, to be able to really understand what he is thinking. -Notoriously MoFulla
This is the best one I came across!
The dignified formality of Nicholson Baker's The Mezzanine describes the unusual tolerance the narrator feels for escalators in his work place. -My Everyday Sticky Waffle
The Mezzanine Claim
In the excerpt from The Mezzanine by Nicholson Baker, he writes with an elevated refinement that is both dignified and straight-forward. There is a chattiness about the writing with words like "black Penguin paperback" and "integral signs swooping upward between two floors". However, they are expressed without ehusiasm. Maybe, they were said nonchanlty, if anything. Yet, the writing is elevated, literally, with "towering volumes of marble and glass" describing what he sees. It is also suggested that the surroundings are lifeless like "radians of black luster" and "needly area of shine" to help emphasize the mechanical feel.
Paranormal Activity 3
This weekend I went to see Paranormal Activity 3 with Amethyst, Bella, Annie, Keyontae, and Harold. I was already nervous about seeing this movie from the previews, but sitting in the theater I was anxious for it to start. I had seen the first and second movie and they had both freaked me out. After seeing the first one, I slept with my parents for a few nights. LBVS. However, I'm a feen for scary movies so I had to see the second one. Then when the third one came out, I was too excited. The cool thing about these movies is that they go in the opposite of consecutive order. The third movie was probably the best out of all three. It had way more paranormal activity and had more jumpy, screaming, crying, holding your face tight moments. Luckily (sarcasm), I had someone to hold (insider). But anyways, I enjoyed the movie. Surprisingly I'm not all that scared either. I get scared pretty easily, but then again I haven't slept alone since the movie yet.
"Currently"
1. The characters speak in colloquial language, using words such as "silly," "darling chicken-flower," and "wop." -Keep It Classy
2. The connotation is figurative and lyrical while the sound melodious as it flows along, defying many grammatical laws. -Intrusion of the Soul
3. The excerpt from Stardust by Neil Gaiman expresses elevated, melodious straightforward diction. For example, "there is one road from Wall, a winding track rising sharply up from the forest, where it is lined with rocks and small stones," conveys precise description that can easily be pictured -Happy Go Lucky
4. Gaiman’s Stardust expresses a familiar yet rather plain diction that is combined with informative and clear language. -Bookworm Days
5. In Neil Gaiman's Stardust, the rocky terrain and harmonious forest create a high sense of tranquility as one observes the town of Wall. -The Blog of Epic Proportions
These are my favorite sentences from other people's blogs because they are very specific and descriptive. My personal favorite was mine, actually. It provided and entire sentence from the excerpt, so the reader could understand the paragraph better.
2. The connotation is figurative and lyrical while the sound melodious as it flows along, defying many grammatical laws. -Intrusion of the Soul
3. The excerpt from Stardust by Neil Gaiman expresses elevated, melodious straightforward diction. For example, "there is one road from Wall, a winding track rising sharply up from the forest, where it is lined with rocks and small stones," conveys precise description that can easily be pictured -Happy Go Lucky
4. Gaiman’s Stardust expresses a familiar yet rather plain diction that is combined with informative and clear language. -Bookworm Days
5. In Neil Gaiman's Stardust, the rocky terrain and harmonious forest create a high sense of tranquility as one observes the town of Wall. -The Blog of Epic Proportions
These are my favorite sentences from other people's blogs because they are very specific and descriptive. My personal favorite was mine, actually. It provided and entire sentence from the excerpt, so the reader could understand the paragraph better.
Style Mapping
Authors have a way of setting the mood in a book, novel, article, etc. with diction. The excerpt from Stardust by Neil Gaiman expresses elevated, melodious straightforward diction. For example, "there is one road from Wall, a winding track rising sharply up from the forest, where it is lined with rocks and small stones," conveys precise description that can easily be pictured.Like the excerpt from Stardust, Blood Meridian, the excerpt by Cormac McCarthy also has ornately formal diction, however, it is also melodiously poetic. The excerpt has a rhythmic flow which is emphasized through various sentences. The sentence "Days of riding where ther rode no soul save he," is poetic in a sense that people everyday do not talk like that. Another writer similar to McCarthy diction is Shakespeare in the foray that they are both musical and poetic. "This old moon wanes! she lingers my desires,/ Like to a step-dame or a dowager/ Long withering out a young man revenue." is an excerpt from A Midsummer Night's Dream that also expresses everything McCarthy's writing portrays.
Response
I have finished reading Tweak and now I am looking for another book to read if anyone has any suggestions! (:
"Currently" Week #8
Finished Tweak!
Only about 20 pages.
Favorite Sentences of the Quarter
1. " As long as you look for someone else to validate who you are by seeking their approval, you are setting yourself up for disaster. You have to be whole and complete in yourself. No one can give you that. You have to know who you are- what others say is irrelevant. "
2. "I always get so overwhelmed trying to do everything perfectly."
3. The hardest thing is to take less when you can get more. -Kin Hubbard (from the blog Banana Smoothie)
Number 3 is definelty my all time favorite because it's so true. Also, in English Lit. we have been reading the Cantebury Tales and one of the themes being Greed.
Only about 20 pages.
Favorite Sentences of the Quarter
1. " As long as you look for someone else to validate who you are by seeking their approval, you are setting yourself up for disaster. You have to be whole and complete in yourself. No one can give you that. You have to know who you are- what others say is irrelevant. "
2. "I always get so overwhelmed trying to do everything perfectly."
3. The hardest thing is to take less when you can get more. -Kin Hubbard (from the blog Banana Smoothie)
Number 3 is definelty my all time favorite because it's so true. Also, in English Lit. we have been reading the Cantebury Tales and one of the themes being Greed.
VBall and Tweak
As of this year I am not playing volleyball anymore. I played since I was about 8 years old, so it's kind of bittersweet. The book Tweak has reminded me to not take anything for granted. Now I will admit that I did take the sport of volleyball and the opportunities for granted. My parents spent thousands of dollars on club volleyball for me to improve and become a better player. I did improve, however, not as much as I could have.
I first got into volleyball because my cousin played and I look up to her so much. I loved the sport until it started becoming a chore. I hated going to practices and even more tournaments. This past year was my last year playing club. But just about every other weekend, I would have to travel to Chicago for a tournament. Honestly, the thing I looked forward the most was the resturaunts, shopping, and going crazy in the hotel rooms with my teamates. Obviously, my head was not in the right place. This kind of reminds me of Nic because he knows what where his focus should be, but it isn't there.
I first got into volleyball because my cousin played and I look up to her so much. I loved the sport until it started becoming a chore. I hated going to practices and even more tournaments. This past year was my last year playing club. But just about every other weekend, I would have to travel to Chicago for a tournament. Honestly, the thing I looked forward the most was the resturaunts, shopping, and going crazy in the hotel rooms with my teamates. Obviously, my head was not in the right place. This kind of reminds me of Nic because he knows what where his focus should be, but it isn't there.
Sideline Article!
I'm still reading Tweak, but I read this magazine article about dreams that I thought was really interesting. Basically it listed 13 facts about dreams:
1. We forget about 90% of our dreams
2. Blind people also dream
3. Everybody dreams
4. We only see faces that we already know
5. Not everyone dreams in color
6. Dreams are symbolic
7. The most common emotion expressed in dreams is axiety
8. You can have 4-7 dreams in one night
9. Animals dream too
10. Body parlysis
11. Men and women dream differently
12. If you are snoring then you cannot be dreaming
13. (idk if this next on is appropriate or not haha) but you can experiance an orgasm in your dream.
1. We forget about 90% of our dreams
2. Blind people also dream
3. Everybody dreams
4. We only see faces that we already know
5. Not everyone dreams in color
6. Dreams are symbolic
7. The most common emotion expressed in dreams is axiety
8. You can have 4-7 dreams in one night
9. Animals dream too
10. Body parlysis
11. Men and women dream differently
12. If you are snoring then you cannot be dreaming
13. (idk if this next on is appropriate or not haha) but you can experiance an orgasm in your dream.
"Currently" Week 7
Tweak
Pages read: 120-300
Total Pages: 180
1. "Sometimes I think she would just prefer it if I was gone completely, so she wouldn't have to deal with me and so her children would be safe."
2. " As long as you look for someone else to validate who you are by seeking their approval, you are setting yourself up for disaster. You have to be whole and complete in yourself. No one can give you that. You have to know who you are- what others say is irrelevant. "
3. "There're a ton of young people at the meetings....it's almost hip to be in recovery here."
I like the first sentence because I can relate to it, my parents don't like us being around family members that use, which is completely undertandable, but sad.
Pages read: 120-300
Total Pages: 180
1. "Sometimes I think she would just prefer it if I was gone completely, so she wouldn't have to deal with me and so her children would be safe."
2. " As long as you look for someone else to validate who you are by seeking their approval, you are setting yourself up for disaster. You have to be whole and complete in yourself. No one can give you that. You have to know who you are- what others say is irrelevant. "
3. "There're a ton of young people at the meetings....it's almost hip to be in recovery here."
I like the first sentence because I can relate to it, my parents don't like us being around family members that use, which is completely undertandable, but sad.
My Weekend
This weekend was sooooooo boring. The highlight of my weekend was watching this Madea movie. lol. That even comes before getting my license. Yeah, that sounds weird, but it comes with too many rules. Therefore I don't want to even use it. Driving isn't that important to me. So yeahh, I did nothing at all!
LOVE MY LIFE
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LOVE MY LIFE
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Tweak
Tweak is about this boy who never was comfortable in his own skin. He started smoking weed everyday at the age of only 12 years old to deal with some of his issues. Many people believe that marijuana is the gateway drug, which is true in this case. He later became addicted to cocaine and heroine. It also doesn't help that the love of his life is also addicted. Therefore, she's not helping him get back on the right track. Heading down that path, Nic, has been in and out of rehabilitation centers. Although he has seeked help, he always ends up relapsing, stealing from his family, and cheating himself along with those around him. In order for him to keep buying these drugs that make him feel so good about himself, he is pulling money out of his little savings account.
This book has hit home in many ways, unfortunately. I have a cousin who did not have the best childhood in the world. Her mother/ my aunt was abusive, an alcoholic, and drug addict. To this day nothing has changed. However, as a child, my cousin wasn't a child. She was forced to grow up at such a young age, which is apparent in the way she acts today. Ironically, she acts more of a child now then she did back then. She is probably making up for all those years that she didn't get to enjoy. Instead of going out and having a good time with friends, she would be stuck withing the jailed walls of her home. She was forced to cook and be the care taker of her younger brother. Her brother was alway the favorite child. He never did anything wrong, while she could do nothing correctly. If Jessica did something the "wrong way", she was called nasty names or even beaten. One time it was so bad her mother called the school saying she was sick so the teachers didn't see the marks or bruises.
Today, she is a spitting image of her mother minus the physically abusive part. She is constantly choosing the wrong guys to date. Right now, she is dating a 19 year old, while shes 24. In this day and age this isn't uncommon, however, he is NO good. He already has a child by another woman, he has no job, no college education, no car, no house....And I'm just sitting back, thinking where does my cousin think this relationship is going to go? He obviously isn't husband material. She, on the other hand, has a career at McDonalds (which is an accomplishment for her). She has a car, but she is also living with my grandma. Jessica should have enough money to move out, but she's addicted to hard drugs. She used to be a "good size" if you know what I mean. Now, shes probably about 100 lbs. which is an unhealthy weight. It's also very evident in her skin tone, her glossy eyes, and her shady behavior. I just pray for her to realize what she's doing to herself, just like I hope Nic in the book Tweak will get over his addiction.
This book has hit home in many ways, unfortunately. I have a cousin who did not have the best childhood in the world. Her mother/ my aunt was abusive, an alcoholic, and drug addict. To this day nothing has changed. However, as a child, my cousin wasn't a child. She was forced to grow up at such a young age, which is apparent in the way she acts today. Ironically, she acts more of a child now then she did back then. She is probably making up for all those years that she didn't get to enjoy. Instead of going out and having a good time with friends, she would be stuck withing the jailed walls of her home. She was forced to cook and be the care taker of her younger brother. Her brother was alway the favorite child. He never did anything wrong, while she could do nothing correctly. If Jessica did something the "wrong way", she was called nasty names or even beaten. One time it was so bad her mother called the school saying she was sick so the teachers didn't see the marks or bruises.
Today, she is a spitting image of her mother minus the physically abusive part. She is constantly choosing the wrong guys to date. Right now, she is dating a 19 year old, while shes 24. In this day and age this isn't uncommon, however, he is NO good. He already has a child by another woman, he has no job, no college education, no car, no house....And I'm just sitting back, thinking where does my cousin think this relationship is going to go? He obviously isn't husband material. She, on the other hand, has a career at McDonalds (which is an accomplishment for her). She has a car, but she is also living with my grandma. Jessica should have enough money to move out, but she's addicted to hard drugs. She used to be a "good size" if you know what I mean. Now, shes probably about 100 lbs. which is an unhealthy weight. It's also very evident in her skin tone, her glossy eyes, and her shady behavior. I just pray for her to realize what she's doing to herself, just like I hope Nic in the book Tweak will get over his addiction.
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